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Wilder by Catalyst
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screenshot added by impakt on 2020-06-14 17:27:19
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release date : june 2020
release party : @party 2020
compo : combined demo/intro
ranked : 2nd
  • rulez 10
  • is ok 0
  • sucks 0
popularity : 47%
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added on the 2020-06-14 17:27:19 by impakt impakt

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Hoo boy. There's a lot of good in there but also balanced out with just as much not so good.

+ Look/rendering/animation is "fine", it's not A+ but it does the job; could've used shadows, just to represent the character's distance from the ground (see screenshot)
+ Soundtrack is great.
- Storytelling / direction is uncomfortably rushed through; you're basically telling a classic "unusual event happens to usual protagonist" Pixar story, but you're about ~15 seconds in when that happens, and then the rest is rushed through in about 2 minutes. Let the scenes breathe, set them up a bit; this is one of those extremely rare prods that should've been twice (if not 3 times) as long. Just listen to the poor soundtrack, it's trying to juggle a bunch of themes trying to keep up with the pace.
- You don't have to cut on every beat or every 2 seconds. I know this is hard when you've seen a demo a thousand times while making it, but try to imagine how long it takes for an average viewer seeing it for the first time to register what's going on in a given shot.
- Also go easy on the camera movement too, especially when you're trying to convey something ominous; the globe scene is a particularly good example where the camera is spinning around way too fast and makes it harder to make out what the viewer is supposed to be paying attention to.

I appreciate you trying to do something different every time, I really do, but now is the time to double down on learning the finer parts of direction.
rulez added on the 2020-06-14 17:48:11 by Gargaj Gargaj
I liked this very much
rulez added on the 2020-06-14 19:29:07 by govatsapadam govatsapadam
wow!
rulez added on the 2020-06-14 21:12:00 by Virgill Virgill
cute looking but felt quite unfinished :)
rulez added on the 2020-06-14 21:32:58 by psenough psenough
Nice concept and cute squirrel
rulez added on the 2020-06-14 21:37:51 by Bobic Bobic
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cute looking but felt quite unfinished :)
rulez added on the 2020-06-15 09:17:27 by Sir Sir
a bit bland in content for my taste but it looks nice. and damn the sound is amazing! so thumbs for that!
rulez added on the 2020-06-15 16:29:54 by sensenstahl sensenstahl
a nice watch
cool sound as others mentioned
haha... what for a cool idea/story and cute intro!
rulez added on the 2020-07-19 10:41:56 by MrVainSCL MrVainSCL
yay, a "storydemo" :)
great soundtrack!
also what gargaj said
rulez added on the 2020-07-24 15:41:05 by jco jco

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