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screenshot added by zerkman on 2013-08-18 17:02:04
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release date : august 2013
release party : Evoke 2013
compo : alternative demo
ranked : 5th
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popularity : 62%
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added on the 2013-08-18 17:02:04 by zerkman zerkman

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Luv it! Smooth, lovely (LOVE THE FONT!). Congrats, especially for such a platform!
rulez added on the 2013-08-18 17:19:37 by phaazon phaazon
Although this is far from impressive from a technical point of view, i was fond of the small story you implemented and especially how it came around at the end without doing any explaining. One gets the point and it gave this small product a lot of its beauty.
rulez added on the 2013-08-18 17:26:12 by CONS CONS
Was a bit too long in my opinion, but the style and feeling was nice.
rulez added on the 2013-08-18 17:29:18 by gaspode gaspode
+ The interesting choice of a limited hardware
+ The effort to bring a coherent storyline
- The overall finish

Thumbs up for the Raspi!!!
rulez added on the 2013-08-18 17:44:53 by fra fra
Regardless of the story, this dragged on for far too long... And ugh, the terrain... I don't know the exact limitations of the RasPi but I'm rather sure that a bit more detailed and diverse terrain should be possible with 64 MB of VRam and 192 MB normal RAM. This way, it looked more like an early software render prod.
My senses of aesthetics hurt.
sucks added on the 2013-08-18 18:39:22 by noby noby
Nice work !
rulez added on the 2013-08-18 18:43:09 by WoDK WoDK
Cute. But a bit long. And very simple billboards.
added on the 2013-08-18 19:56:57 by Optimus Optimus
Despite the longish cam movements between the 'scenes' I was somehow captivated by the story itself.
rulez added on the 2013-08-18 20:47:42 by Den Den
What others said: too long.
added on the 2013-08-18 21:36:19 by moqui moqui
Nice, but a bit long.
rulez added on the 2013-08-19 09:00:19 by Mystra Mystra
Lovely :) nice feeling + concept (but I agree about the length)
rulez added on the 2013-08-19 12:32:59 by alk alk
piggy for platform only, but you should know that it can do a lot more than that.
added on the 2013-08-19 17:33:58 by provod provod
What Saga and w23 said.
added on the 2013-08-19 20:44:35 by Alpha C Alpha C
Zerkman <3
rulez added on the 2013-08-19 21:16:23 by baah baah
I do like the story, and I bet you know yourself that the presentation could have been better, though for your (first?) demo together it's quite neat.

To the story, it's quite a brick you throw at the audience to chew on - but it's good that you went with it. It made me think about using the opportunities that show up while walking alive on this beautiful planet (it's not 0x00ff00 though), though put more time into it next time - you have the ideas :)

Also titeiko slap zerkman when he uses that colours again, liked your 2D graphics!
added on the 2013-08-19 23:38:47 by mog mog
Nice platform, and I would actually like to see more demos in this vein. The colours and camera paths did indeed need work, but I liked the 2D gfx and the actual presence of a story!
rulez added on the 2013-08-19 23:52:22 by fizzer fizzer
A weak thumb up from me. I liked the concept, and the way it was done was in a good direction I think.

On the other hand, it was too long for the content. The message can get lost if the mind wanders in between making points. And the visuals could have been better (particularly the camera paths, at times they seemed pretty random).
rulez added on the 2013-08-20 00:25:01 by psonice psonice
Nice demo, a bit long and slow, but with a coherent story and direction.
rulez added on the 2013-08-20 08:59:46 by flure flure
way too long so it sadly tends to be boring (because there is nothing going on between the points of the story and the visuals aren't an eyecandy). but it's a really nice concept, so motivational thumb ;)
rulez added on the 2013-08-22 20:57:58 by sensenstahl sensenstahl
what noby said
sucks added on the 2013-08-23 23:30:39 by SiR SiR
What Flure said, thumb up !
rulez added on the 2013-08-24 19:11:21 by Cyg_BLaBla Cyg_BLaBla
technically: pathetic
otherwise: too long but i like what it tries to do
added on the 2013-08-24 20:04:57 by superplek superplek
no that bad (dont know technical possiblities of the platform). Anyway it's a quite boring "1 effect only" demo.
added on the 2013-08-25 15:32:46 by Tigrou Tigrou
Really too long.
added on the 2013-08-30 04:09:05 by iks iks
added on the 2013-09-08 17:13:09 by BackSpace BackSpace
added on the 2013-09-08 17:40:10 by las las
great platform, but that's about it.
added on the 2013-09-16 00:58:22 by xtrium xtrium
added on the 2013-09-16 01:04:30 by Lycan Lycan
yeah more like melena
sucks added on the 2013-09-16 01:06:56 by aegis aegis
ARM1176JZF-S (armv6k) 700 MHz
-> I am sorry, even if early (not really) effort, the Rπ can do way better than that!
Those "effects", i can do on any Amiga, cannot impress on that Hardware!
Also i felt the music to be pretty uninspired!
sucks added on the 2013-09-17 16:50:05 by ɧ4ɾɗվ. ɧ4ɾɗվ.
Would be good as an early software rendering demo but this really doesn't use the Pi's hardware well. You have a 700mhz ARM processor and hardware accelerated 3D with 256mb of system RAM. Make use of it!
sucks added on the 2015-03-24 09:17:10 by PROSM PROSM
Raspberry Pi
rulez added on the 2015-04-11 11:58:19 by Xyl2k Xyl2k
Trivia: melina has a rather peculiar meaning in Polish ;-)

Jokes aside, this is a totally uninspiring piece of work (and don't get me started on how exciting the demo was to watch), so got to thumb this one down.
sucks added on the 2015-04-11 12:14:00 by kbi kbi
I like the moody melody though

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