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Looked promising at first but grew bored after looking at it for a while. Too bad, I loooove wireframes tho.

This is my first prod.
please, let me know your impression.

Jesus! This is nasty!! I know it's your first prod, but this really should be one of those poor attempts you keep to yourself.

Nice effort for a first prod, especially for a one-man prod.

2 major issues imo:
- try to make it less boring next time, it's way too repetitive (and so it the music)
- design and color scheme are highly questionable

Looking forward to seeing more prods from Asia :)

keep up the work ... everybody has to start somewhere ... :)
ps : i can't believe you can't find any genious designer in asia, come on ! ;)

ok I pressed escape after some time. Music was horrible, at instantiating all my running programs overlapped the window.

nice flame effect. Good try for a first one off. Take me to your sister.

Can someone point me to something shane coded so i can compare some of his code to this ?

I like it. Try other colors ;)

it's one scene, but I've seen worst first 64ks and I like wireframes and techno, so an encouraging upward digit is given

Well, the music is... horrible :)

way better than shanes 1st prod, but still some way to go..
(unless shanes 1st prod was some genius masterpiece which was never released and his crap releases are just cruel jokes)

i agree :)
but hey, JAPAN HAS DEMOSCENE NOW!
i think that's cool :)

I've not coded anything, but it seems I'm the only one with the balls to be honest here. Yeah, he has potential, but stop patronising him!

If I released something like this most of you would be whining to get it removed or have me banned.

...and I never deny that we have made some crap prods, but what we lose in quality we make up with originality. More sceners should try that some time.

Yeah, he has potential, but stop patronising him!

Where's the sense in that? If he has potential then he SHOULD be patronised. I mean, isnt that the whole point?

i second that, gargaj.
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also, i'ma keep on whinig about shane as long as i feel happy with it ;)



always acting like you was a elite scener, maybe you should try some time to keep something to yourself. and, shane, as i got it you've been around the scene for more than 10 years, so where the p**k is your progress?
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Jesus! This is nasty!! I know it's your first prod, but this really should be one of those poor attempts you keep to yourself bye shane...

I think he's achieved more than shane already with only 1 release

I'm one of the most famous sceners around today! You might not like it, but you can't deny it!

...and I've stirred more feeling, controversy and entertainment in the scene than anyone before me...barring one or two, perhaps!

an ancient portuguese saying states that "pouët != scene && scene != pouët"

But come on, let's not clog up this page and take the limelight away from the intro, there's a fitting topic on the bbs where you can dig at me...

http://pouet.net/topic.php?which=1615

first prod or not, this is very bad. demoscene is a kinda cruel society, as always was.
oh, and what about the ancient saying of "patronising != putting a gloss on the truth"?

nice

nice but way too short (looping forever?)

huhh. this is really bad.

Not bad! I'm excited to see what the asian scene can do in the future. =)

I somehow liked it. Wouldnt recommend to watch it on psychedelic drugs though :)

I like it, and I don't. There isn't enough change in it for my taste. You see everything after 10 secs, then it gets boring. But the direction is the right one (not yet another object show).

Quote Shane: "Jesus! This is nasty!! I know it's your first prod, but this really should be one of those poor attempts you keep to yourself."

Well after seeing your shit you made I don't think you have any veto to flame other peoples stuff like this. Sod off Shane.

well.. everybody had 1st attempts :) keep it up.

btw, i don't hear any sound :/

Thank you very much for many comments.
I know that I should do the next steps.
thanks million!!

all i can say is.. this is probably my choice(already) for worst 64k of 2005.

let this be inspiration for the creater to keep trying and improving.

ok for first prod. kick your skills and make a prod that looks more then a 3d accel. test

darkus: is that a challange?

stelthz: why? have you made something worse we are yet to see? :)

massive ugly, horrible music. its a firstprod allright ;)

some elements were nice, next time you'll do it better =)

Was going to say I liked the Sting sample in the background, then I realised I was playing an MP3. DOH!

Can't really thumb it down for the sake of the effort.

3/10 See me after school.

It's one scene with a tiring movement ;P

postscript:
This prod concept is one scene/one bar sound.
I made some scenes and more long music for another prod, I felt my scenes are paled before another scener's one because I don't have much conding skills, then I thought... I deleted some codes and over 50 bars of the music for this prod. but
It was the purpose that expression by looping of a combination with minimum scene and minimum sound.
but many people refused this prod.
My thoughs was failuer.
I'll make a next prod which is using moderately length music and some boring scenes.
but I want to try making a cool one scene/one bar music prod again someday...

100% GLAM 100% DEZIN .. heuh :P

well, sonmescener, I want to hear your impression to see the following past prods and musics.
If you have a time, please help me.
Certainly, these are not demo.
http://www.viep.org/eng/archive.html

y16i, don't take it bad, but the amount of code, graphics and music (re-synthesized) was enough just for a 4k.

thanks pan!
it was enough just for a 4k... I have to lern more and more.
thank you very much.

nice try but it flows too fast....

mmm...a little boring

i like the overall energy flow, but pressing [ESC] is inescapable ;)

shane: go play with your fake account beef thumbing up all your prods...

There's something in this that's just cool in a weird way. Probably the blocky movement or something..

nice challenge.
however, boring scene and too short...

y16i:
ohisasiburidesu. (3nen buridesuka.)
sikasi 64kb to ha yokuyarimasita.
jikai no sakuhin ni kitaisitemasu.
saigo ni japanese scene ni motto kouken
site kudasai!!

crap

It was cool before I got bored. Making the intro auto-exit after 30-40 seconds or so would be an improvement. Also, get a real musician.

This is definitely better than my 1st 64k and it's opensource! Deserves a thumb :D

i just love japan, thats all;)

Down :(