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MuffinHop information 1627 glöps

• general:
• level: user
• personal:
• first name: S
• last name: Savilampi
• cdcs:
• cdc #1: Baygon by Melon [web]
• cdc #2: I Feel Like a Computer by Melon [web]
• cdc #3: "Kings of the Playground" - Evoke 2004 64k invit by Equinox [web]
• cdc #4: Razor 1911 cracktro by Razor 1911 [web]
• cdc #5: literal acid phase by Dekadence [web]

• demo Windows dat bass
• I wonder why this didn't get placed higher. But yeah some of the scenes are fairly dark and you cannot see much. Also the music got a bit crazy so that broke the experience. But this one is ok.
• rulezadded on the 2015-08-10 01:16:19
• demo Java WorkInProgress by Xywzel
• Sorry, no. The music was quite terrible and it's full of coder colors. Next time try to find a bit more pleasing colors atleast. Last years entry was a lot better. Sorry for being so straight about this, but I hope Xywzel will release more.
• sucksadded on the 2015-08-06 21:01:06
• demo Java play for freedom
• First reminded me of { by Downtown and therefor enjoyed the first half a lot. Not so much the later half. Just my personal taste. One of many favorites in the compo. Keep it up.
• rulezadded on the 2015-08-06 20:55:32
• demo Java Derp
• Lots of potential here. I'll just comment that check out GeomeX from the same competition, it has fairly similar effects but better transitions between scenes.
• isokadded on the 2015-08-06 20:50:01
• demo Java 3d fire disco
• Lots of things to work on here. Maybe next time tie the camera somehow to the scene, effect and soundtrack. Also maybe those particle flames should've ignited at a rhythm.
  
  There is this term called 'coder colors'/'debug colors' which means you have color values that are hard colors like full red. These kind of colors tend to also form a gradient or a rainbow. This makes scenes look way too colorful and gives the audience a feeling that a production has a lack of effort, even if that's not the case.
  
  Fix atleast one of these in your next production and I'll give you thumbs up for improving.
• isokadded on the 2015-08-06 20:47:22
• demo Java Sähköjänis
• Ok so this one got last. Yeah it's not great and fairly simple but if it had a minimalistic soundtrack and nice sync on top of that this could've been kinda cool.
• isokadded on the 2015-08-06 20:34:05
• demo Java Zef by Gluster
• Forgot my motivational thumb up. Keep improving.
• rulezadded on the 2015-08-06 15:36:16
• demo Java Zef by Gluster
• This is your 3rd production and I can see you've improved a lot!
  
  Track does fit the demo fairly well and carries the demo nicely even if there was not much of a theme in the demo.
  Biggest problem was the overall emptiness of the background in many of the scenes.
  
  Pythagoras tree/Snowflakes may be to only fractal that has not been overused yet in the demoscene so they didn't bother me too much. More color could've been applied to this scene maybe.
  
  The spaceship(?) scene was fairly empty and a bit out of place especially when it's had no texture and was fairly static. When the ship shaked the scene became ridiculous since there was no rhyme or reason for it. And may have been the reason why this production didn't do as well as it should've.
  
  I kinda liked the stairs. Some variation to it would've helped, dunno what. Reminded me a lot of some unknown 64k from around 2000. Tunnels are just way overused nowdays so the tunnel(I'm guilty on this too) scene didn't really interest me too much.
  
  The bouncing blockhead really made this demo rememberable. Scene stood out from everything else and maybe you should've placed it more to the end of the demo. The next effect(I don't have a name for it) might have been better with a background but it was too shortly on the screen so I cannot be absolutely sure on this. Ok plasma.
  
  This should've placed in the top 3 like noby already said.
• isokadded on the 2015-08-06 15:35:27
• demo JavaScript Encore by The Royal Elite Ninjas Inc. [web]
• Quote:

  Rendering is a bit fuzzy due to all the bumpmaps, but I like it a lot for a firstie

  
  Wait what firstie? This atleast my 16th. Dysposin and Lovebox/l10 have done stuff to multiple demos. Maybe pumpuli's firstie.
• isokadded on the 2015-08-05 19:57:44
• demo JavaScript Encore by The Royal Elite Ninjas Inc. [web]
• Quote:

  Felt like a 90's dream of a 2000's demo. Love.

  
  That was the original idea to have this 90's wipeout styled 'what 2000s demos gonna be' style. But got a bit side tracked.
  Really nice to hear that you got that impression.
• isokadded on the 2015-08-05 18:42:42