Gargaj information 7079 glöps
- general:
- level: user
- personal:
- first name: Gergely
- last name: Szelei
- portals:
- csdb: profile
- slengpung: pictures
- demozoo: profile
- cdcs:
- cdc #1: Xaos by Mist
- cdc #2: Saint by Halcyon & Da Jormas [web]
- cdc #3: 604 by AND [web]
- cdc #4: 0010 1010 by Federation Against Nature [web]
- cdc #5: kolonija by kosmoplovci [web]
- cdc #6: synthematik by Outracks [web]
- cdc #7: There by Still [web]
- demo Linux Windows Luna : Reactivation by vovoid [web]
- If you're making a story demo, one of the most important things you have to consider is direction. Cinematography, editing, lighting, music. And yes, the fact that you're mentioning it in the credits means you know that too.
The problem is that there doesn't seem to be any direction here, the opening scene is one long tracking shot which kills any emotional connection or chance for storytelling, whereas the "dance scene" is cut to death (often not to music) completely breaking the flow. Parts are separated with jarring changes and the last time I saw so much dutch-angled shots was Battlefield Earth - probably not a good thing. The stutter edits in the music are painfully misplaced.
It's the exact opposite of what you, I suppose, you wanted to do. You could say it's just a demo, but then take a look at Tribes and how that was shot / edited / scored, and how you SHOULD direct a story demo. As it stands, this is just two prolonged story bits with an cheesy uptempo middle section. - isokadded on the 2012-03-19 11:11:16
- demo Windows Calyx by Penumbra
- noby: still not too late.
- isokadded on the 2012-03-19 01:11:02
- demo Wild 107 years birthday jubilee by Accession & Damones [web]
- it doesn't "run" on facebook, it's an iframe to http://netapps.fi/svenn/maailmanlopunsynttarit/
- isokadded on the 2012-03-18 16:45:23
- demo MS-Dos/gus Kossuth Díjas Paraszt 303 by FiRG!
- http://index.hu/belfold/2012/03/14/a_nagy_kossuth-dijas_teszt/
- isokadded on the 2012-03-14 19:42:32
- demo Windows Scenic by UnRAVeL
- Could've used a bit less RGB but I guess that comes with age :D
- rulezadded on the 2012-03-07 16:32:45
- wild Wild Skid Row Road Rash Crackintro Remake
- well, at least the downloadlink is broken now.
- isokadded on the 2012-03-02 12:39:24
- 16k game Windows Frolicking Furballs Safari Resort by The Sos [web]
- I love how the readme.txt doesn't really explain how to play :P
Great technical effort either way! - rulezadded on the 2012-02-27 16:18:07
- demo Windows Easter Retardians by Odd
- :/
- isokadded on the 2012-02-27 13:31:50
- demo Windows Elg by Odd
- <3
- rulezadded on the 2012-02-17 15:56:14
- demo invitation Amiga AGA Revision 2012 Invitation by Focus Design [web]
- choooooon!
(now can we have that pixeled picture separately? :) - rulezadded on the 2012-02-12 12:41:25
account created on the 2001-08-10 21:46:26
