When the rain fell...
category: residue [glöplog]
okkie: thank you for making me laugh so hard my lunch almost came up. :)
I doubt that okkie is the author of this story as I remember reading a similar story some time ago. Perhaps he just altered some of the words and phrases etc.
ADOK IS READING PORN STORIES ;-)
A future doctor has to be educated at sex ;-)
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what a bitch
No shit.
Okkie, you're FIRED.
Adok: I did write it last night, and you're an idiot.
shifter: don't hate me because i'm beautiful!
shifter: don't hate me because i'm beautiful!
I don't hate you because you're beautiful, I hate you because of more tangible truths -like wring slash-fic about Adok. I do not need this shit :)
Part 2
Adok looked at the mess on his bed, what had he done! The body of Ulrike lied motionless on the filthy sheets, blood dripping on the floor. He heard a voice outside.
"Ulrike? Where have you gone!"
The boyfriend was walking around in the appartmentbuildings hallway.
"He doesn't know who I am, she doesn't know she's here!" Adok said to himself as he slowly closed the bedroom's door. He had to stop this man from looking and then find a way of disposing the body.
He walked out of his house, towards the boyfriend, who still was calling for his girlfriend.
"Excuse me sir, are you looking for a blonde girl?" Adok asked as inconspicious as possible.
"Yes, yes!" the man said with a voice trembling of panic "Have you seen her?"
Adok frowned, trying to look as puzzled as possible, he didn't want to give himself away.
"I think I saw her walking that way" he said, pointing at the exit of the building. "She seemed a bit disorientated."
The boyfriend didn't even wait for him to finish his sentence and ran outside screaming. "ULRIKE!!! ULRIKE!!! I'M SO SORRY!"
"Easy as pie!" Adok said to himself and pretended to slap some dust of his hands. He went back inside and opened a new beer. Time to think of a plan to get rid of this filthy whore's corpse.
He sipped from the can while looking at her remains. What was he to do. He was studying to become a doctor and maybe could smuggle her into the hospital he was an intern at. He then could chop up her remains and place them in the containers of bodyparts used in experiments. This sounded like a pretty solid plan, the only problem was getting her stuff overthere at this hour of night. Eventhough the hospital was open 24 hours a day, him coming in at 2 a'clock at night would look suspicious and he didn't want to leave one element of this action doubtful!
He checked his kitchen for garbagebags to transport the bodyparts in when he heard a sound.. it came from the bedroom! Quickly he ran to the room to hear a gurgling sound. ULRIKE WAS STILL ALIVE!
He walked upto the bed, he saw that she tried breathing through her broken nose. She tried to speak..
"Wha.. 'av you don' to ... me.." she managed to say "Why.."
"I'm sorry Ulrike, but I had to do this. You wanted to use my superior sperm for evil purposes and I could not let that happen!"
He looked at her mangled frame, her sad eyes, he had to end this right now! He grabbed a pillow and pushed it on her face.
"There there" he said "Go back to sleep!"
She fought at bit, but was weak from exhaustion and bloodloss, after mere minutes there really was no life to be found in this womans evil, evil carcass. It was now official, he killed his first woman..
He went back to the kitchen and grabbed the biggest knife he could find. He had to act quickly, the boyfriend would eventually get tired of looking and inform the police about Ulrike missing. He had to be out of the building before they came for questioning.
He started slicing her body up to pieces when he noticed her vagina. Rigor Mortis had not yet set in and it was still warm and moist. He remembered the feeling he had before when he was pounding away in her holiest of holy's and he decided that 'barely dead' was as good as alive. He took his cock out and started to penetrate the corpse of Ulrike. Fuck, this was better than expected! He actually got off more to the idea of fucking a corpse and while pounding away he grabbed the huge knife from the sheets. He could do both at the same time!
So there he was, a soon-to-be doctor fucking the corpse of a 20 year old woman while slicing bodyparts of her. He had severed her head, arms and unwanted bulges like her breasts, while still pounding away in her, now somewhat stiffening, pussy. He came with a blast realizing there where now two portions of his superior sperm in her womb and he had to make sure they would never found it!
He cleaned up his mess and finished the slicing, removing all her genitalia organs in a plastic bag in his freezer, they contained his sperm and where not to be brought! He double bagged everything in the pastic bags.
There he was, setting in the appartment smoking a cigarette, looking at all the plastic bags stacked in his kitchen. Now he had to find a way to get to the hospital unnoticed, he didn't own a car and the busses did not go at this unholy hour..
Stay tuned for part 3!
Adok looked at the mess on his bed, what had he done! The body of Ulrike lied motionless on the filthy sheets, blood dripping on the floor. He heard a voice outside.
"Ulrike? Where have you gone!"
The boyfriend was walking around in the appartmentbuildings hallway.
"He doesn't know who I am, she doesn't know she's here!" Adok said to himself as he slowly closed the bedroom's door. He had to stop this man from looking and then find a way of disposing the body.
He walked out of his house, towards the boyfriend, who still was calling for his girlfriend.
"Excuse me sir, are you looking for a blonde girl?" Adok asked as inconspicious as possible.
"Yes, yes!" the man said with a voice trembling of panic "Have you seen her?"
Adok frowned, trying to look as puzzled as possible, he didn't want to give himself away.
"I think I saw her walking that way" he said, pointing at the exit of the building. "She seemed a bit disorientated."
The boyfriend didn't even wait for him to finish his sentence and ran outside screaming. "ULRIKE!!! ULRIKE!!! I'M SO SORRY!"
"Easy as pie!" Adok said to himself and pretended to slap some dust of his hands. He went back inside and opened a new beer. Time to think of a plan to get rid of this filthy whore's corpse.
He sipped from the can while looking at her remains. What was he to do. He was studying to become a doctor and maybe could smuggle her into the hospital he was an intern at. He then could chop up her remains and place them in the containers of bodyparts used in experiments. This sounded like a pretty solid plan, the only problem was getting her stuff overthere at this hour of night. Eventhough the hospital was open 24 hours a day, him coming in at 2 a'clock at night would look suspicious and he didn't want to leave one element of this action doubtful!
He checked his kitchen for garbagebags to transport the bodyparts in when he heard a sound.. it came from the bedroom! Quickly he ran to the room to hear a gurgling sound. ULRIKE WAS STILL ALIVE!
He walked upto the bed, he saw that she tried breathing through her broken nose. She tried to speak..
"Wha.. 'av you don' to ... me.." she managed to say "Why.."
"I'm sorry Ulrike, but I had to do this. You wanted to use my superior sperm for evil purposes and I could not let that happen!"
He looked at her mangled frame, her sad eyes, he had to end this right now! He grabbed a pillow and pushed it on her face.
"There there" he said "Go back to sleep!"
She fought at bit, but was weak from exhaustion and bloodloss, after mere minutes there really was no life to be found in this womans evil, evil carcass. It was now official, he killed his first woman..
He went back to the kitchen and grabbed the biggest knife he could find. He had to act quickly, the boyfriend would eventually get tired of looking and inform the police about Ulrike missing. He had to be out of the building before they came for questioning.
He started slicing her body up to pieces when he noticed her vagina. Rigor Mortis had not yet set in and it was still warm and moist. He remembered the feeling he had before when he was pounding away in her holiest of holy's and he decided that 'barely dead' was as good as alive. He took his cock out and started to penetrate the corpse of Ulrike. Fuck, this was better than expected! He actually got off more to the idea of fucking a corpse and while pounding away he grabbed the huge knife from the sheets. He could do both at the same time!
So there he was, a soon-to-be doctor fucking the corpse of a 20 year old woman while slicing bodyparts of her. He had severed her head, arms and unwanted bulges like her breasts, while still pounding away in her, now somewhat stiffening, pussy. He came with a blast realizing there where now two portions of his superior sperm in her womb and he had to make sure they would never found it!
He cleaned up his mess and finished the slicing, removing all her genitalia organs in a plastic bag in his freezer, they contained his sperm and where not to be brought! He double bagged everything in the pastic bags.
There he was, setting in the appartment smoking a cigarette, looking at all the plastic bags stacked in his kitchen. Now he had to find a way to get to the hospital unnoticed, he didn't own a car and the busses did not go at this unholy hour..
Stay tuned for part 3!
" He went back inside and opened a new beer."
pure comedy!
pure comedy!
[quote]"He doesn't know who I am, she doesn't know she's here!"[quote]
Something's wrong here :D
Something's wrong here :D
and I didn't mean my fuxx0red BB Code :D
So, next try:
Something's wrong here :D
So, next try:
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"He doesn't know who I am, she doesn't know she's here!"
Something's wrong here :D
yeah, that's one s to many :) That happens when you can't be bothered to proofread and just click 'submit' :)
sooooo okkie is actually shane's cousin?
Not as good as the 1st one, it went slightly too absurd here. Still good.
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WHY?!? Ulrike is a true German name. Or as shifter would say: van duitse bloed.If you remove the shit about races and change the name of the girl, the story is OK.
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Great, I think I know what'll come in future episodes. \o/It was now official, he killed his first woman.
lol- but remember: the truth is sometimes more frightening than fiction..
Thats one good story BUT its fucking shit to tell such crap about person :/
WHY?!? Ulrike is a true German name. Or as shifter would say: van duitse bloed.I don't like that name nevertheless.
Disclaimer: All characters and events portrayed in this work are fictional and any resemblance to real people or incidents is purely coincidental.
then go on making part 3!
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. Right. The Real Adok wouldn't have acted that stupidly.any resemblance to real people or incidents is purely coincidental.
will he suddenly realize she was already pregnant and have his way with the fetus next?
and when the bf discovers, kill him then call in the mensa buddies and gangrape the corpse of the boyfriend.
then trick them all into commiting mass suicide and move to peru!
and when the bf discovers, kill him then call in the mensa buddies and gangrape the corpse of the boyfriend.
then trick them all into commiting mass suicide and move to peru!
Ulrikakakakakaka
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BUT THAT'S NOT A REASON TO KILL HER, YOU BASTARD!I don't like that name nevertheless.
If this would be a movie, I'd want Cannibal Corpse as soundtrack.
