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My first try...

I've seen worse first tries with werkkzeug. But seriously, the colors need a lot of work :)

Crashed(?). But that's prolly my PC's fault. I hope there was credits for the tune somewhere. Some dreadful colors indeed but keep trying! ..mine would be worse..

please: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ynnOq6G29Io

FULL 100 ACK TMB!!!

crikey...

I think it was cute, but regardless, some minor nitpicks:
- Demoscene traditionally works with archives - zip/rar your thing, put file_id.diz, nfo, things like that.
- Try to credit your musician next time. (Unless you're a well-known music producer / rapper.)
- Pay a bit more attention to Z-fighting, the floor was rather flickery here.
- Try not to go through solid objects next time :)
- The colors, well, need work, but hey, that's obvious :)
- The transparent objects need to have Z-writing disabled else they'll look ugly and clip into each other.
- Some strange flickers when the camera looks up.

I could go on but I guess this is enough for now. :)

jeeez ... i hate demotools in the wrong hands!

a thumb up for doing this first try. do some more trys and you'll make some big progresses. don't let you demotivate by the ratings here.

I didn't want to thumb down because you said this is your first try and it's somehow promising. But the problem is you've just created a static scene and moved the camera. This is not a scene demo but a 3d engine demonstration. Next time try to move these torus objects etc. a little bit. And a few real "demo effect" wouldn't hurt.

go on ;) next time make more animations, effects, etc...

The unarchived download drove my virus guard completely nuts warning me to hit the deck 'cause hell's comin' through the bloody wire.
Beside that. Wouldn't it been smarter to first _practice_ the proper handling of ... a demotool/demomaker before releasing "trials" as a product, left aside throwing it into this snakepit of Pouët?!
I kindly suggest that you might study the thing (WZ) until you're ready enough to send it straight to hell and start your own stuff or manage do squeeze impressive things out of it.

Piggy as it's 1st try. Keep on trying things out and like they say, practice makes perfect. Good luck on future prods.

I offer this instead of The Demotool: http://nehe.gamedev.net/

Keep on trying.

for a first try this is not bad! Keep it up!

good luck with your next works!

Keep on trying and so on. This is horrible but hopefully you can develop your skills :)

omg

My virussoftware don't like your exe... Trojan inside ? >:|

ugly + werkkzeug

Music kewl, but this tune take from cracktro by Hybrid. Demo similar on the project of a pub or cafe ;)

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keep your wekkzeug plays for yourself, seriously.

what preacher said