LLB information 310 glöps
- general:
- level: user
- personal:
- first name: Laurent
- last name: Le Brun
- cdcs:
- cdc #1: numb res by Carillon & Cyberiad [web] & Fairlight [web]
- demo Windows Our Other World by Hoodlum [web]
- Obviously a lot of work. Congrats for shipping the demo!
My recommendation would be: remove some content, remove the least interesting scenes, shorten the long scenes. Make your demo just 3 minutes, but make sure the content you keep is polished.
Watch your demo without the sound and you'll notice which parts are too slow, long, or boring. Camera is difficult to do, but please try a bit harder. If you change your shots and camera moves, you can make the content much more enjoyable.
Good luck with your next demo! - rulezadded on the 2017-08-26 20:23:58
- 4k Windows Cycle Of Nature by Loonies [web]
- Good particle tech and good ideas, but it lacks polishing. I cannot really complain, you had just 4kb. But I'd love to see an extended version of it, maybe in 8kb. It can be much more than that!
Oh, and please remove the Revision logo, it just doesn't fit.
Good work, I really love the concept! - rulezadded on the 2017-05-02 02:53:55
- 64k Windows Surge Response by Approximate [web]
- Great work! I'm not a big fan of the direction, but it looks and sounds good. You've got a very good engine. I can't wait for your next intro!
- rulezadded on the 2017-05-02 01:00:15
- 64k Windows Vessel by Conspiracy [web]
- Very lovely! I hope you'll do more intros of this kind.
And the music is perfect! - rulezadded on the 2017-05-02 00:51:47
- 64k Windows engage by Logicoma [web]
- Superb!
Very well polished, excellent soundtrack, great style. - rulezadded on the 2017-05-02 00:45:24
- 4k Windows Horizon Machine by Eos & Alcatraz [web]
- My favourite 4k in the compo. Impressive rendering!
- rulezadded on the 2017-04-30 17:35:42
- 4k Windows Rhodium by Alcatraz [web]
- Wow!
One of the best 4k intros! - rulezadded on the 2017-04-30 17:30:21
- 8k Windows rise again by Alcatraz [web]
- http://youtubedoubler.com/kS9t
- rulezadded on the 2017-04-22 15:28:02
- 64k Windows off by Mercury [web]
- Nice and stylish intro, well done (especially in such a short time)!
But next time, please clean the lens :) - rulezadded on the 2017-04-20 11:48:34
- 64k Windows H - Immersion by Ctrl-Alt-Test [web]
- It was - just like the (more subtle) references to Still and Mercury :)
- isokadded on the 2017-04-18 15:15:18
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