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When the rain fell... The REAL story!

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It was rather late (almost midnight) when Adok came home. He had been spending the evening with his Mensa friends playing mind games and discussing the correlation of IQ and criminal behaviour. What a day! First all the boring lectures, then these crappy games and the silly guys who take pride in being members of Mensa but aren't ready to accept that high-rank criminals such as Al Capone were geniuses... All the time on his ride back, he was trying to think about something better which would elevate his mood. Petra. That was her name. Petra was a student of molecular biology, doing her PhD, living at the other side of the town. They hardly ever saw each other, Adok and Petra, but whenever Adok saw her, he had this feeling... that she was just the one he had been looking for throughout all his life. But due to Adok's shyness towards women, he's never managed to tell her what he was feeling.

Petra, Petra... If she only could be near me and if I only finally found the courage to make my confessions! He had already tried calling her by phone, but she didn't pick up. As a matter of fact, he had found two different phone numbers of hers in the telephone book. One didn't yield any result whenever he called, as if the owner of that number had made the phone go down the toilet or something like that, and the other he only called once, as a male voice responded. Did Petra have a boyfriend? He didn't know. She was such a clever and diligent young woman aspiring to high ideals, a high-profile student and future scientist that Adok could hardly believe she would prefer intimate experiences with a man over her studies. However, the fact that one of the two phone numbers listed in the directory was now owned by a man made Adok wonder whether this man was related to her in some way, or if it was simply a coincidence, or maybe even a mistake in the directory.

So Adok returned home and logged onto the Internet to reply to emails and check out various websites. After doing so, he switched on the TV and started watching the latest episode of Criminal Minds, which was his favourite TV series.

This time a crook had threatened to poison a whole town, and thanks to Dr. Reed's encyclopedic memory it could soon be found out what the toxic substance to be used for that poisoning was. As this substance was characteristic of a certain industry, it was thus possible to limit the number of suspects.

The series was still going on when, all of a sudden, the bell rang. Adok was puzzled. At that late time, this was very unusual. The bell rang again. Should he do something about it? As Adok was now living alone, he felt he had to. Otherwise he'd have left this to his parents, but now he had no other choice except being man or being corward. So Adok went downstairs and looked out of the door-window. He had to look twice as he couldn't believe it. Standing in front of his door... wasn't this Petra?!?

Oh Petra, the woman of my dreams! But... What was she doing here? She was living at the other end of town! How come she was here... at half past eleven, p.m.?

Adok went upstairs to fetch the keys out of his purse which he used to deposit there, and attempted to open the door. But then he hesistated. Maybe it was a halluzination, or an illusion? So he decided to make sure and use the outdoor-speaker. "Hello, hello?" Adok said. "Hello Claus!" said the woman. "Don't be surprised! It's me, Petra!" Indeed, it seemed to be here! The voice was fitting, too! "Petra! What a nice... But why are you there?... Wait, I'll let you in!" Adok exclaimed joyfully and opened the door.

So Petra was standing in front of him - dear Petra, cute Petra, the content of Adok's dreams! Adok let Petra in and closed the door afterwards. "So, Petra, what has made you come to me... that late? Where do you know my address from at all?" Adok asked. "Well, the address", Petra replied, "I know from your homepage!" "Oh right", said Adok, "of course there's my address, in the imprint. The Austrian government has enacted a law that forces you to publish such data. OK. So what's your desire?"

"My desire?" Petra said and giggled. "That's a a nice wording!"

"Thank you." Adok was happy that she had made such a benevolent remark,

"Well, I must make a confession."


"You know, there's this disco at the shopping city nearby?"

"Yes. I've never been there, but I regularly see kids visiting it in the train which I use for returning home from university."

"OK. So to cut it short: I've been there."

"You visit discos? Wouldn't have believed that!"

"Well..." Petra said slightly embarrassed, "now you know."

"Ah, I don't mind, Petra. Great students such as you also need to have some fun from time to time."

"I was there... together with a friend of mine."

"A friend of yours? Male or female?"


"Oh, okay."

"Hehe, are you envious? Well, let me tell the story. We were dancing, having fun, when all of a sudden somebody robbed my purse."

"Oh, that's bad! What did you do about it?"

"Not much. We told the barmen... but they could hardly do anything about it, either. We've got to tell the police tomorrow. In any case, I cannot return to my flat today because my keys were in the purse. So I wondered where I could spend the night instead. And since I remembered that you're living close to the shopping city, I suddenly had the idea to come to you!"

"Oh, that's a nice decision. We have a guest-room upstairs... you could sleep there. By the way, where's your friend?"

"She... she has returned home. Or let's better say, is returning home."

"Why didn't you go together with her?"

"Well, it's a bit complicated. But there's a reason why I'd prefer not to spend the night at her home."

"Ah... okay. Well, Petra, you're welcome. Wanna drink something?"

"No, thanks. I'm fine."

As Adok was talking about drinking, he noticed Petra didn't seem to be alcoholized in any way. The girls had apparently stayed good at the disco, not consuming any bad things. Adok liked that. That was the Petra he knew and was dreaming of all the time.

"So, what do you wanna do, Petra? Tired already, wanna go to bed? Or let's do something together before that?"

"I'm not that tired yet... Maybe we could sit down and chat a bit?"

"Good idea! By the way, I was just watching Criminal Minds. Wanna join me?"

"Criminal Minds? Well, okay!"

So the two of them went upstairs and sat down on the sofa in front of the TV in order to watch Criminal Minds.

Adok quickly retold Petra what had happened thus far, and she said that it was obvious. So they spent a quarter of an hour watching the rest of the series.

Actually Adok was hardly thinking about what was happening on the TV screen any more. Petra, the girl of his dreams, his secret love number one was sitting next to him! It was THE opportunity... But he knew that he had to resist. He had to show his affection in a more subtle way.

On the other hand, maybe Petra was also in love with him? After all, she had chosen to spend the night at his place. Why Adok of all boys out there? Was it just because he was living not too far away from the shopping city? As a matter of fact, the distance was only low taking the train (three stations), but it would mean quite a long walk going by foot. Perhaps Adok could find out more about her romantic feelings by asking her if she had gone by train or walked! So Adok decided to ask this question as soon as the series would have ended.

Adok carried out his plan, and Petra answered: "You won't believe it - I walked."

Adok was excited! She had gone all the way by foot... although it hadn't been necessary... Did that mean that...?

"Why did you walk all this way? You could have taken the train, it would have just been three stations?"

"I know... But I wasn't keen on taking the train because... because I'm somewhat claustrophobic. At least after that event. You must know how I was feeling!"

"Yes, I understand. After spending time in the crowded disco and being robbed there you didn't want to enter a similarly crowded train."

"Right. So I decided to walk."

"But it was raining!"

"Yes, it was..."

"And cold!"


Adok was startled. "But this could mean you've caught a cold!"

"Oh, that happens to me from time to time... nothing to be worried about... I don't mind..."

"Petra, oh Petra... Well..."

And he was looking in her eyes, and she was looking in his eyes. They were looking into each other in a way they had never been looking before... and at once, both of them knew what they were feeling for each other.

Adok bowed down to Petra and kissed her. Petra put her arms around Adok's broad shoulders and did the same. They kissed for many minutes. Finally Petra sighed and muttered, "I love you. That's why I came to you." Adok replied: "I love you, too."

Petra and Claus then began doing what educated men and women usually call "making love". It was a wonderful experience for both of them. Adok realized why Petra had reacted in that particular way when he had used the word "desire". Yes, both of them had desired each other - they had desired each other for years, but neither of them had been courageous enough to admit it. Now an unplanned incident had finally brought the two of them together.

The day was saved - both for Petra and Claus.

The couple stayed together for many years, married, had children and led a happy life until their retirement at very old age.
added on the 2006-11-16 07:51:05 by Adok Adok

I used me super leet speed reading skillz to read this in 2 minutes.

No character development, no conflict potential. Boring..

added on the 2006-11-16 08:42:44 by Stelthzje Stelthzje

Btw.. I always thought this was petra:

added on the 2006-11-16 08:44:54 by Stelthzje Stelthzje
haha, so, what part of this story is real?

Anyway, too less vaginal fluid, sorry adok, try again!
added on the 2006-11-16 09:18:16 by okkie okkie
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added on the 2006-11-16 09:24:44 by jxn jxn
wtf is wrong with u guys
added on the 2006-11-16 10:08:00 by alien^PDX alien^PDX
no fun this time
added on the 2006-11-16 19:37:30 by rmeht rmeht
Okkie and Adok are some kind of bizarro-brothers. I am amazed at the amount of insanity in here.
added on the 2006-11-16 19:58:25 by Hyde Hyde
If you need help with writing i might assist you for a low cost.
added on the 2006-11-16 20:14:26 by Hatikvah Hatikvah

They retired, and then it all turned ugly? What happened?
added on the 2006-11-16 20:23:39 by doomdoom doomdoom
I don't feel like reading all that stuff above right now.
added on the 2006-11-16 20:36:07 by bdk bdk
I am very scared that the text might actually reflect what Adok would do in that situation. It's possibly the geekiest.. uh... something ever...
added on the 2006-11-16 20:42:13 by defbase defbase

The funny part is that Adok would probably never engage with a molecular biology PhD, because she would make him feel inferior. Medicial degree vs. molecular biology is like technician vs. computer scientist. The former just has to apply things he learned from a big manual and by experience, which the latter does actually figure out how things work.
added on the 2006-11-16 20:42:29 by Stelthzje Stelthzje
That whole story is a blatant fake. While the beginning may be true, it is one single remark of out dearest Petra that marks the turning point (from truth to fiction) in this story. This really ruined it for me:

... because I'm somewhat claustrophobic.

(On a slightly related note: I can't believe i actually read that...)
added on the 2006-11-16 20:55:53 by steam steam
Med and bio students aren't that different yet.
added on the 2006-11-16 21:19:07 by Adok Adok
I continue the story:
Adok woke up from his wet dream. He still was pounding the outcutten flesh from Ulrike.
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added on the 2006-11-16 21:38:19 by Zest Zest
Let's start telling a story about crosbow.

Crosbow was walking home from the t-shirt store where he was working at when all of a sudden ...
added on the 2006-11-16 21:39:43 by Adok Adok
Okkie's story was more entertaining.
added on the 2006-11-16 21:44:26 by Sverker Sverker
Ok i continue again:
he commited suicide.

... Crosbow met the girl he had been longing for all the time and never dared to talk to. After a superfical storyline ,borrowed from a telenovella, they married and lived happily ever after.
added on the 2006-11-16 22:04:40 by Stelthzje Stelthzje
s/girl/boy ?
added on the 2006-11-16 22:09:57 by Stelthzje Stelthzje
Ok, the story goes like:

Crosbow was sitting at his computer. On the way to Toilett he noted that the world already has ended. The Way to Toilett was pretty long, but the lithified corpse rapage shortend the way up. Well on the toilett he met Adok, still pounding that flesh. Crosbow joined them by mutilating himself and fucking the now with Ulrikes flesh melted uberflesh.
And if they had not found something good to die for, they are still pounding LOLZ


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