muzak electronica
category: general [glöplog]
what do you guys think of this tune :
http://www3.sympatico.ca/d.ahni/andromeda.mp3
computer made of course :)
i've been an old time amiga tracker and just woke up from a 10 years sleep (omg that was long).
Sun
http://www3.sympatico.ca/d.ahni/andromeda.mp3
computer made of course :)
i've been an old time amiga tracker and just woke up from a 10 years sleep (omg that was long).
Sun
great, i like it. bit like "emotrance"
I thought the track was great! I love the style and it sounds very tuneful and intelligently composed to my ears. Hope to hear more in the future.
Cheesy desktop pop. And also, it's still spam. I dislike both things.
good
Well done my friend. You have the makings of a talented musician. Continue to practice and you should improve as time passes. Be patient though and you will start to see results.
I think you should not rely on pouet opinions too because there are a lot of jealous people who will spite you because they fear the competition.
Do you remember when Queen tried to sue Vanilla Ice for stealing their backing for Under Pressure. They did it because they saw Vanilla Ice was becoming a huge star and they were jealous. They thought they could draw attention to their music by taking credit for Vanilla Ices talent and fame.
Tomaes tells you it is cheesy desktop pop and spam. He could tell you it is good just to make you happy and keep you active. It wouldn't hurt him to say that but he criticises instead. He doesnt even say how you can make it to his taste. Why? Because he wants to kill your talent before it becomes a threat.
Watch your back my friend!
I think you should not rely on pouet opinions too because there are a lot of jealous people who will spite you because they fear the competition.
Do you remember when Queen tried to sue Vanilla Ice for stealing their backing for Under Pressure. They did it because they saw Vanilla Ice was becoming a huge star and they were jealous. They thought they could draw attention to their music by taking credit for Vanilla Ices talent and fame.
Tomaes tells you it is cheesy desktop pop and spam. He could tell you it is good just to make you happy and keep you active. It wouldn't hurt him to say that but he criticises instead. He doesnt even say how you can make it to his taste. Why? Because he wants to kill your talent before it becomes a threat.
Watch your back my friend!
Quite good, maybe slightly cheesy.
I'd recommend following ultimate gas's suggestion, and steal part of a famous and talented band's music, and rap badly over the top of it ;) Actually, I was hoping it would be a remix of andromeda by astral projection, that tune rocks :)
More seriously, the tune was pretty good, composition was good, overall atmosphere was good too. It would make a pretty good demo sound track.
I thought the chords could be better, but were alright still. The main tune was good, perhaps the lead instrument could be better. Drums were ok, nothing special. Can't comment on the bass (if there is any) cause I can't hear it on my shitty speakers.
Keep going, that's a promising (re)start.
I'd recommend following ultimate gas's suggestion, and steal part of a famous and talented band's music, and rap badly over the top of it ;) Actually, I was hoping it would be a remix of andromeda by astral projection, that tune rocks :)
More seriously, the tune was pretty good, composition was good, overall atmosphere was good too. It would make a pretty good demo sound track.
I thought the chords could be better, but were alright still. The main tune was good, perhaps the lead instrument could be better. Drums were ok, nothing special. Can't comment on the bass (if there is any) cause I can't hear it on my shitty speakers.
Keep going, that's a promising (re)start.
The instruments sounds good, the chords sounded perfect in my ears, and its well mixed. but the lead melody didnt catch me that much, but its a matter of taste :-) However its a neat little song and ill give you my thumbs up.
I like it, the chords are nice and it would sound good as a demosoundtrack. My only negative critisizm would be the rather high pitch of the lead. It`s a good melody though! Sounds quite old skool too.
Not my cup, but i can see the nice work behind the song. Ultimate Gas is right, most of pouet.net users aren't very kind among newcomers, so don't worry too much. For me the main point is : QUALITY. And there is, yes !
And about Queen vs. Vanilla Ice, i guess they sued him for ripping a sample from them AND winning great amount of money with it, so Queen wanted their %.
And about Queen vs. Vanilla Ice, i guess they sued him for ripping a sample from them AND winning great amount of money with it, so Queen wanted their %.
Ultimate Gas wrote:
Tomaes tells you it is cheesy desktop pop and spam. He could tell you it is good just to make you happy and keep you active. It wouldn't hurt him to say that but he criticises instead. He doesnt even say how you can make it to his taste. Why? Because he wants to kill your talent before it becomes a threat.
He asked for opinions and at least I assumed that he likes to hear honest opinions, not asslicking. I'm sure he's old enough to cope with some not-praising comments and remarks. And secondly, making music to fit a certain taste (in this case, my taste) is bull, except you're working in a media company and getting paid for tv-ad songs and jingles. I don't like cheesy trance pop, period. There is no point in making it fit my taste. There is nothing he can do about it, neither can I. As long as he enjoys it, it's all well and fine.
Thirdly, there is no 'thread' and obviously he is no beginner either, who needs some extra-soft care.
And finally, such things are still off-topic here (but then again, 90% of pouet threads are...). There are plenty of place on the web where it isn't. United-trackers, noerror.org and many portals for home-recorded music of all possible styles are much better places to ask for feedback anyway. :)
Tomaes tells you it is cheesy desktop pop and spam. He could tell you it is good just to make you happy and keep you active. It wouldn't hurt him to say that but he criticises instead. He doesnt even say how you can make it to his taste. Why? Because he wants to kill your talent before it becomes a threat.
He asked for opinions and at least I assumed that he likes to hear honest opinions, not asslicking. I'm sure he's old enough to cope with some not-praising comments and remarks. And secondly, making music to fit a certain taste (in this case, my taste) is bull, except you're working in a media company and getting paid for tv-ad songs and jingles. I don't like cheesy trance pop, period. There is no point in making it fit my taste. There is nothing he can do about it, neither can I. As long as he enjoys it, it's all well and fine.
Thirdly, there is no 'thread' and obviously he is no beginner either, who needs some extra-soft care.
And finally, such things are still off-topic here (but then again, 90% of pouet threads are...). There are plenty of place on the web where it isn't. United-trackers, noerror.org and many portals for home-recorded music of all possible styles are much better places to ask for feedback anyway. :)
thanks for the input guys :) it helps
i've updated the song so if you're curious, well, feel free :) same url.
oh btw people in united tracker just doesn't talk.
it's as if they ignore renoise.
i'll go check noerror tough.
i've updated the song so if you're curious, well, feel free :) same url.
oh btw people in united tracker just doesn't talk.
it's as if they ignore renoise.
i'll go check noerror tough.
Not bad :) More of this please ;)
..but not here. pouet is about demos, not music. there are more than enough musician/tracker-websites and irc-channels out there.
